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Nessy
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Correct me if i'm wrong ... ^^

Post by Nessy » Sun 07.30.2006 9:41 am

今は照る太陽であるが、雨は前に降っていた。
The sun is shining now, but it was raining before.

Is this sentence right ?

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Post by richvh » Sun 07.30.2006 9:45 am

I think 今太陽は照っているが、前に雨が降った is better.
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Post by paul_b » Sun 07.30.2006 9:47 am

richvh wrote:
I think 今太陽は照っているが、前に雨が降った is better.
A lot better, but rather literal.

How about 今晴れているが・・・ ?

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