私のブログ

[Christian_]

I hope this is the right section, anyway:

I started a blog, I think it will help me practice my Japanese. I just made a post and was wondering If I wrote everything correctly. Heres the link: http://cnoburogu.blogspot.com/

I can't believe I've studied a year and still suck, but its because of being lazy, I plan on really studying hard this year.

EDIT: I have no Idea on how I would write this, so can someone help me out? How do I say "This blog is for practicing japanese" or "I made this blog to practice japanese" whatever is easier.
Heres my attempt:
このぶろぐは...on second thought I don't have an attempt sorry.

[Ongakuka]

I recommend you put 好きなもの for "things you like" rather than just 好き。

[richvh]

百人、日本人じゃない。 Am white, not a Japanese person.

I think you meant 白人, and you need a で after that and before the comma. (You said you were 100 people. "My name is Legion")

日本語を勉強した間一年。 Studied Japanese for one year.

You've stopped studying? Better would be 一年間日本語を勉強している

１４年です。 Am 14.

You are the year 14? Better would be １４歳です

好き: Like

好きなこと would be better.

[tanuki]

richvh wrote:

百人、日本人じゃない。 Am white, not a Japanese person.

I think you meant 白人, and you need a で after that and before the comma. (You said you were 100 people. "My name is Legion")

His father's name must be Centurion.

[Ongakuka]

好きなこと would be better.

Of course- he was talking about hobbies- not actual possesions. Ignore my post (好きなもの） 'cause it's wrong.

[Ezrach]

Christian_ wrote:
EDIT: I have no Idea on how I would write this, so can someone help me out? How do I say "This blog is for practicing japanese" or "I made this blog to practice japanese" whatever is easier.
Heres my attempt:
このぶろぐは...on second thought I don't have an attempt sorry.

このブロッグは日本語を練習するためのものです。(This blog is for practicing Japanese.)
日本語を練習するためにこのブロッグを作りました。(I made this blog to practice Japanese.)

One thing to note - Japanese is a proper noun, so you'll want to capitalize it.

Christian_ wrote:
キリスト人です。 Am Christian.

キリスト人 is something along the lines of "the man, Christ". Unless you are the man Christ, you should use クリスチャン, meaning, "Christian" as in a follower of that religion. Even more proper would be キリスト教徒.

[paul_b]

Ongakuka wrote:
Of course- he was talking about hobbies- not actual possesions. Ignore my post (好きなもの） 'cause it's wrong.

You know you can edit and delete your posts don't you?

For that matter so could I ...

[Ongakuka]

You know you can edit and delete your posts don't you?

My my, technology these days...

For that matter so could I ...

[Christian_]

Alright thank you guys so much, I really have some studying to do, but I have been trying a lot more lately. I hope to be as fluent as you guys soon, lol

どうもありがとうございます！！！

Edit: I got all the changes made thanks again. I have another question, is it ブログ or ブロッグ?

[Sachi]

The first one

Thanks for mentioning your blog; I totally forgot about mine! But having your own Japanese blog really makes you think It's great practice, and really helps you learn a lot.

Keep up the good work!

Edit: And I got to leave the first comment, woot! I left my small 2 cents worth there

[paul_b]

Christian_ wrote:
Edit: I got all the changes made thanks again. I have another question, is it ブログ or ブロッグ?

[wiki]Dictionaries[/wiki].

[adam]

Christian, two things.

庶l際ですshould be 庶l歳　or 庶l才 . 際 is the wrong Kanji and makes me think of 14 festivals.

Not really sure if you left these two in english on purpose but,
Skateboarding スケボー
Kenpou Karate 　拳法　（けんぽう）

Anyway, looking good so far! Best of luck.

[Infidel]

"My name is Legion"

Legion is a lot more than 100.

[chchan45]

一年間日本語を勉強している。 Studied/am studying Japanese for one year.

Do you mean "I have been studying Japanese for a year"? In this case, I think 一年間日本語を勉強しているた may be more appropriate.

[paul_b]

chchan45 wrote:
一年間日本語を勉強している。 Studied/am studying Japanese for one year.

Do you mean "I have been studying Japanese for a year"? In this case, I think 一年間日本語を勉強しているた may be more appropriate.

I take it that was a typo for 一年間日本語を勉強していた ?

I think 一年間日本語を勉強していた reads like "I studied Japanese for one year (some time in the past).