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RE: Round robin story

Postby Rounin T » Fri 01.12.2007 5:25 pm

You're right, the first に should have been either は or を. Let's keep your correction.

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RE: Round robin story

Postby richvh » Fri 01.12.2007 5:42 pm

あっという間に、
あっというまに、
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RE: Round robin story

Postby Tspoonami » Fri 01.12.2007 5:45 pm

婆は
ばばは

... Well, that whole sword-drawing thing was... I don't know... I guess maybe I was thinking that he would do something cool, like throw his sword at an enemy who was comoing down the path or something... The story has taken a very odd tangent, now...
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RE: Round robin story

Postby Rounin T » Fri 01.12.2007 6:23 pm

美人に
びじんに

... and it could turn anywhere at any moment!
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RE: Round robin story

Postby richvh » Fri 01.12.2007 7:06 pm

化けて、
ばけて、

Though I'd like to insert a の姿 between 美人 and に.
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RE: Round robin story

Postby Rounin T » Fri 01.12.2007 7:13 pm

掘っ立て小屋から
ほったてごやから
richvh wrote:
Though I'd like to insert a の姿 between 美人 and に.

いいですよ。
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RE: Round robin story

Postby richvh » Fri 01.12.2007 7:22 pm

出かけた。
でかけた。
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RE: Round robin story

Postby Rounin T » Fri 01.12.2007 7:25 pm

惚れちゃったのは
ほれちゃったのは
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RE: Round robin story

Postby richvh » Fri 01.12.2007 7:29 pm

敵たちの
てきたちの
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RE: Round robin story

Postby Tspoonami » Fri 01.12.2007 7:35 pm

酋長の
しゅうちょうの
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RE: Round robin story

Postby richvh » Fri 01.12.2007 7:38 pm

長男だった。
ちょうなんだった。
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RE: Round robin story

Postby Tspoonami » Fri 01.12.2007 7:49 pm

侍は
さむらいは
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RE: Round robin story

Postby richvh » Fri 01.12.2007 7:55 pm

美人のそばなので、
びじんのそばなので、
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RE: Round robin story

Postby Tspoonami » Fri 01.12.2007 8:28 pm

鞘から
さやから

For some reason, now I'm remembering 'That 70's Show,' and that episode where Red is reading that book with the pirate captain and the princess and the sword...
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RE: Round robin story

Postby richvh » Fri 01.12.2007 9:13 pm

日本刀を
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