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RE: Round robin story

Postby richvh » Fri 01.05.2007 5:24 pm

、崖っぷちに
、がけっぷちに
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RE: Round robin story

Postby Rounin T » Fri 01.05.2007 7:41 pm

着いた
ついた
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RE: Round robin story

Postby richvh » Fri 01.05.2007 8:04 pm

のだ。
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RE: Round robin story

Postby Rounin T » Fri 01.05.2007 8:30 pm

We're getting toward the end of the page, so I'll compile everything we have so far:

昔々、ある日に、侍が走ってた。敵達が激しく追いかけてた。どんどんと足音がますます近く聞こえていた。侍は、突然止まった、崖っぷちに着いたのだ。

むかしむかし、あるひに、さむらいがはしってた。てきたちがはげしくおいかけてた。どんどんとあしおとがますますちかくきこえていた。さむらいは、とつぜんとまった、がけっぷちについたのだ。

Well, it's not bad for a round-robin story. ね?

I'll start the next sentence:

逃げる
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RE: Round robin story

Postby richvh » Fri 01.05.2007 8:51 pm

Yes, not bad. I think the only grammar mistake is that 止まった should be changed to 止まって.

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RE: Round robin story

Postby marquis » Fri 01.05.2007 9:24 pm

歩き出しているよ。
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RE: Round robin story

Postby richvh » Fri 01.05.2007 9:30 pm

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せまい
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RE: Round robin story

Postby Rounin T » Sat 01.06.2007 1:13 am

Time out... did marquis finish the sentence? It doesn't make sense to me in the context of the story, so I'm lost as to what's going on.
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RE: Round robin story

Postby richvh » Sat 01.06.2007 9:00 am

Didn't really make sense to me, either, but I tried to run with it. Do you want to back up to my previous word and continue from there?
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RE: Round robin story

Postby Rounin T » Sat 01.06.2007 3:37 pm

よろしければ、そうしたいと思います。

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RE: Round robin story

Postby richvh » Sat 01.06.2007 3:39 pm

ないようであるが、

Edit: changed politeness level, since we're using plain-form narration. I'm not sure if だ form or である form is more common in narration.
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RE: Round robin story

Postby Rounin T » Mon 01.08.2007 1:35 pm

そう思ったら、
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RE: Round robin story

Postby richvh » Mon 01.08.2007 2:29 pm

下の
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RE: Round robin story

Postby Rounin T » Mon 01.08.2007 2:33 pm

海岸に
かいがんに

Edit: I keep forgetting the kana.
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RE: Round robin story

Postby richvh » Mon 01.08.2007 2:41 pm

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