The TJP Novel Game!

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Post by richvh » Sat 01.31.2009 9:51 am

So, the young man took the group to the next village where he said, “Here you go, These are the ones. They have special abilities which you would appreciate, and which never fail to please anyone.”

So, Hachirou chose the one with the greatest powers, while Shichirou was pleased by his decision of importance and carefully chose his companion. However, Musashi and his brother went to choose a...

(Huh? When did Musashi get a brother? Should we revise "his brother" to "Ichirou"?)
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Post by becki_kanou » Sat 01.31.2009 1:56 pm

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"his brother" was referring to Shichirou's brother Ichirou, but I guess it does sound confusing. So we can change it if you like.
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(I think a change of "his brother" to "their brother" would clarify things.)
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