I need a Flavour (I mean favour of course)

[Inkinsarto]

So I uploaded something, but I wish for any feedback upon it before the reader views the upload. It makes more sense to look at the link first.
And please excuse my doltishness within the situation-

http://www.wattpad.com/story/24409270-t ... the-tittle

Thank you to anyone who reads; and please comment on this forum and not the story.


minasanwa doumo arigatou gozaimasu!!

[Shiroisan]

oh god