What's your opinion? Lemme know!

[StarvingMusician]

I have something here. Is it more affective if I replace the 'she's to 'you's?

When she speaks,
there's a soothing innocence.
When she sings,
I hear a ringing harp.
She resonates amidst the ocean
of dandelions.
She's the sunflower in the garden.
Her delicate words brimming
with hope.
The shine of her honeyed
petals spring the daylight.

[Infidel]

affective > effective.

Well, the answer depends. Are you trying to make this syncronize with some music or follow some form of meter? Then the answer depends on the meter.

Keep in mind that if you change the she's you will also need to change the verbs.