ゆきの物語 - Chapter 5

[Lego]

Yeah I'm heading towards unexplored territories! I feel very excited! B)

I knew that Yuki was just to lucky, and Vagabond and samurai's movies thaught me that it wasn't very safe for a girl to travel alone

this chapter went very quickly... I'm not very sure about the ending dialogue though

Chapter 5 - HEEEELP!!! (oooueeeeendaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan! lol)

The next morning, the shopkeeper handed Yuki a letter and said: "After you reach the capital, please give this letter to the landlady of the spa. That person is my older sister."
"Really? If that's the case, I'll surely deliver the letter to your sister", said Yuki.
Then Yuki headed toward the capital, while the merchant took a different direction.
Soon Yuki met some ronins.
"Goodmorning, noble samurais. I'm called Yuki", she said to the chief of the ronins.
(ahhh, don't talk to strangers, Yuki!)
"Huhuhuhu. Why is such a beautiful girl travelling on this road?" said the chief.
(I'll never trust people laughing this way)
"I'm going to the capital to look for fortune" said Yuki.
"Today is a lucky day" said the chief while grabbing Yuki.
"Sure it is" said the other ronins.
"Ahhh! You are not samurais! You are bandits! Keep away those hands! Help, help, heeeeeelp!" screamed Yuki.
In the blink of an eye one, two, finally one hundred foxes showed between the ronins, and bite them and made them stumble.
"Beasts! Ghosts! Run away!" said the ronins.
"I'm protecting this girl. Fellows like you can't touch her even with a finger" said a fox to the ronin's chief.
Then the ronins run away chased by the foxes.
"Mr.Fox, thank you very much for your help." said Yuki.
"Would you take another pearl?"
"I can't accept it" answered the fox. "You haven't called me even twice. Please continue"
"I'll continue" said Yuki. "Then, please excuse me".
Then Yuki headed toward the capital.

[richvh]

"You haven't called me even twice" >> "You may still call me twice more"

The rest isn't too bad.

[Lego]

thanks richvh
I found a little error (maybe) in chapter 6
On line 7 (more or less) you have put まんばん　as furigana for 門番

[richvh]

Thanks. I'll fix that after I get home tonight.