Extremely short excerpt

[Ady001]

I've been studying Japanese for about 3 years now, and I'm still not getting any (not that Simple Plan album) formal education. However, I have a translator, which could check my grammar. However, I still need a live person to check my grammar.

Here is an excerpt from my novel-in-progress. It's called -Stern-. I really want to write in a language I'm trying to master in. Here is the extremely short passage

-STERN- の小説

すみません：この小説は元々英語です。

ダクダオは忙しなと郊外な角にダバオ市のです。この道はたくさんが静かな空気と奇麗な木；パーフェクトな所に絶望な人です。

ダクダオ-A road in Davao City.
ダバオの市-A City from the Philippines