Writing and translating a poem

[Curry_Girl]

I wrote this poem and then translated it and wanted to know if the vocabulary and grammar were correct. I know it's not too much of a poem but any practice and correction is good. I also apologize for no kanji.

I love the snow,
But, snow is water
And sooner or later it will melt.

ゆきがすきだ
でも，ゆきはみずだ
そして，そばんとける。

[ubuntuooo]

楽しんでいます。すばらしいね

i like poem too

>And sooner or later it will melt.
>そして，そばんとける。

「そばん」　→　「そうばん」？

[Curry_Girl]

Yeah it was supposed to be そうばん. Thanks for catching that. I do drop letters while typing. A very bad habit that needs to be worked on. XD

[ubuntuooo]

Yeah it was supposed to be そうばん. Thanks for catching that. I do drop letters while typing. A very bad habit that needs to be worked on. XD

それはだれでもやったことがあるんだね

check it before you post it

[Curry_Girl]

The very sad part is that I triple checked it. X3