italian song

[exxe]

hi,

I'm tring to translate some phrases from an italian song.

"there is not a single cloud above us"
it's correct :
わたしたち上雲がありません ?

[coco]

わたしたち の 上には 雲 ひとつ ありません。
would be better.

The translation of lyrics (poem) is more difficult than plain conversations.
(I guess special skills are required.)

As this article
http://www.thejapanesepage.com/readarticle.php?article_id=126
We have some Personal nouns for "ourselves" too.
like「わたしたち」「ぼくたち」「おれたち」「われら」ect.
The ending form will also change by a main character of the song too.
「〜ないのさ。」「〜ない。」「〜ないぜ。」「〜ないわ」「〜ないよ」etc.