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Need help! Thanx! :)

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Need help! Thanx! :)

Postby Koara » Wed 06.27.2007 7:09 am

Could someone tell me if the following sentences in english are right?..Thanx!..Also, if there are not right,..thanks to correct 'em! Thank you very much! XxXxX
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>> Need a qualitative translation from english(or other) to french? That's here! :) (if the demands grow much, I'll not translate more than five demands per week!..And one demand per person please!..Thanks for you understanding!
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Thanks again XXXXXX
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RE: Need help! Thanx! :)

Postby richvh » Wed 06.27.2007 9:03 am

The paragraph below is better. "Demand" is too pushy for this context. You might want to list a length limit as well.

Need a quality translation from English (or other language) to French? You've come to the right place! (If there are too many queries, I won't translate more than five queries per week. And only one query per person please! Thank you for understanding.)
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RE: Need help! Thanx! :)

Postby AJBryant » Wed 06.27.2007 9:06 am

"Demand" is too pushy for this context. You might want to list a length limit as well.

Probably a faux-ami issue with French -- "demander" is "to ask/request" in French.

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RE: Need help! Thanx! :)

Postby Koara » Thu 06.28.2007 6:04 am

Hello :)!..Thank you very much!!..:D XxXxX
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