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Help with Japanese HW... anyone know haiku?

Postby acerunner » Thu 11.15.2007 4:35 pm

Hey I was wondering if any one here is good at making up haikus. It's for my Japanese class tomorrow, and it has to "be symbolic".

Mine went like:

Samui kawa
Something something (+past tense for verb "to fly")
Kabuto mushi

Translated roughly to: Flew to the other side of the cold river, beetle... or something. I need help remembering what that middle bit said... and of course it must have only 7 sylables... I dunno if this makes any sense. Please don't yell at me.

:p :D
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RE: Help with Japanese HW... anyone know haiku?

Postby jenl » Thu 11.15.2007 6:19 pm

How did you manage to lose only the middle of a haiku? :D

向こうに飛んだ?
(mukou ni tonda)
Just a guess from an English-speaker.

http://altjapan.typepad.com/my_weblog/files/beetle.jpg - and here's a nice photo of kabutomushi! :o

For bonus points, do you know the reason the first and last lines of this haiku conflict? If you don't, try having a read here: http://etext.virginia.edu/japanese/haiku/saijiki/
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RE: Help with Japanese HW... anyone know haiku?

Postby acerunner » Thu 11.15.2007 6:36 pm

jenl wrote:
How did you manage to lose only the middle of a haiku? :D

向こうに飛んだ?
(mukou ni tonda)
Just a guess from an English-speaker.

http://altjapan.typepad.com/my_weblog/files/beetle.jpg - and here's a nice photo of kabutomushi! :o

For bonus points, do you know the reason the first and last lines of this haiku conflict? If you don't, try having a read here: http://etext.virginia.edu/japanese/haiku/saijiki/


I think that was it! Thanks so much!!! :O :O
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RE: Help with Japanese HW... anyone know haiku?

Postby Valatunda » Fri 11.16.2007 3:42 am

acerunner wrote:
Samui kawa


Wouldn't you use 冷たい (つめたい) for something like a river?

There is an interesting jeKai entry on the differences between 寒い and 冷たい.
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RE: Help with Japanese HW... anyone know haiku?

Postby tōkai devotee » Fri 11.16.2007 6:29 am

Yes, I agree you would use 冷たい for river, or any water for that matter, but then it wouldn't fit into the haiku would it? It'd be too many syllables.
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RE: Help with Japanese HW... anyone know haiku?

Postby Mike Cash » Fri 11.16.2007 7:48 am

Valatunda wrote:
acerunner wrote:
Samui kawa


Wouldn't you use 冷たい (つめたい) for something like a river?

There is an interesting jeKai entry on the differences between 寒い and 冷たい.


This may interest you.
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RE: Help with Japanese HW... anyone know haiku?

Postby jenl » Fri 11.16.2007 8:16 am

(Although really one could play a little with those restraints)

We could work around it with a little punctuation :D (sorry, no IME on this computer)

samui, kawa
mukou ni tonda
kabutomushi

(cold -
flew across the river
- rhinoceros beetle)

Additional wordplay here, perhaps: mukougawa can also mean "other side" and kawamukou is "other side of the river".

Traditional haiku use a single seasonal image word to focus the poem. samui usually suggests winter, kabutomushi suggests summer. So it's a bit odd to see them together, that's all I was saying before.

Related: there is an internet-based saijiki here: http://www.haiku.jp/saijiki/index.html

Here is an example for kabutomushi:
子は知つているくぬぎ樹のかぶと虫 - 稲畑汀子 (I think there's meant to be a small 'tsu' there in shitte)

A child knows
the sawtooth oak's
beetle
- Inahata Teiko
(people who are better at this than me - is 'は' being used to show contrast here, implying that an adult would not know this? It's hard to show that in English.)

None for samui, but they list samusa:

日の落ちて波の形に寒さあり - 稲畑汀子

fading sun -
in the shape of the waves
is the cold
- Inahata Teiko

I'd love a 歳時記 of my very own, but it might be difficult to source one here in England unless I can figure out how to get amazon.co.jp to ship here.
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