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[Majik4ever]

Howdy all!

I've been working on revamping my 'Learn Japanese' web page for a couple of months now and was wondering if anyone out there would like to contribute a lesson or two for it...

Also any tips on how to make it better welcome!

Link:
http://learn.majik4ever.com

Ps.
(Relax Clay-sama...I'm not trying to step on your toes....(this is more of a site for teaching my friends.)
Oh, and by the way your site sooo out ranks mine!! I give it a 10+^^)

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Edit:I forgot the link.... (need to stop payin attention to the television..lol)

[saraLynne]

Er... you didn't provide a link to it.

[Majik4ever]

Oh...Sorry 'bout that.....Doh XD
Ok, fixed.

Too many things going on at once..lol

If you spot any errors, sure to let me know!

[tyle7]

Majik4ever wrote:
Also any tips on how to make it better welcome!

I'll take you on your words and point out some things that can be improved in the 2 lessons on your site.

First I noticed that words usually written in katakana are written in hiragana. If you change loanwords into katakana this will be fine.

Secondly you seem to have switched place between あなた and あんた, I would not say あんた to a stranger...

Fireworks are written はなび　rather than はんあび. I also see that you have listed ええ　as 'good', but I think that just applies to Kansai-ben. (I might be wrong, i am not a native speaker). In standard japanese ええ is mainly used as a less formal version of はい.

Good luck with your site, and happy japanese-learning.

[Majik4ever]

Thanks!>>Domo arigato gozaimasu!
I don't know what I'd do without you guys!

Oh...as for the 'ee'='good' I got that off this site...

As for the "はんあび" thing, I don't know where I got that...lol

[AJBryant]

Majik4ever wrote:
Oh...as for the 'ee'='good' I got that off this site...

I think there's a disconnect.

"Ii" is "good" -- and it's PRONOUNCED /ee/ as in "feet" (only longer)

"Ee" is "yeah," and is pronounced /eeeh/ as in "bed" (only longer).


Tony

[Majik4ever]

Oh, okay!
どもありがとございます！
*go to fix lesson :@*

Edit: Fixed! B)