I was wondering if anyone here could help me out a bit by telling me how to improve my grammar in these paragraphs, and what I did wrong.
The content of them is all nonsense, but it's the language used that matters.

Sorry, it's just I'm supposed to be limited by what kanji I know.Mike Cash wrote:You have a lot of 入力 and 漢字変換 errors that make it harder to wade through than do the grammar/style errors.
It would be easier to work with if you would go through and (as best you can) correct the typos and then include the text directly in the post instead of as an image file.
AJBryant wrote:Becky, Becky, Becky.
Ya gotta start teaching more fishing techniques instead of doling out fish.![]()
Tony
Just something that struck me, but how do you know the kanji for 灯籠流し and 広範 but not えいが?FlonneThe FAllen Angel wrote:Sorry, it's just I'm supposed to be limited by what kanji I know.
I assume they just put everything into the IME and just went with whatever came out. Depending on how many words they had strung together when they pressed the henkan key, the right kanji or the wrong kanji would have come out.becki_kanou wrote:Just something that struck me, but how do you know the kanji for 灯籠流し and 広範 but not えいが?
Not teasing, I'm actually curious.
I don't.becki_kanou wrote:Just something that struck me, but how do you know the kanji for 灯籠流し and 広範 but not えいが?
Not teasing, I'm actually curious.
I've only used an online translator to translate single words that my dictionary does not contain.richvh wrote:How about using a dictionary next time? Automatic translators should not be used to translate into a language other than your own for anything other than laughs. They should be used to translate into your own language only to get a rough idea of what is meant.
That's not the way forums work. When you're done with a topic, it's simply abandoned, not deleted.FlonneTheFallenAngel wrote:Would it be possible to now get this topic deleted?
Where does the gun come in?Wakannai wrote:deleting a topic is like pointing a gun in someone's face and telling them, "This conversation never happened."