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Watashi no nikki-Yonde kudasai!

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Watashi no nikki-Yonde kudasai!

Postby Tabetai » Mon 10.27.2008 5:39 pm

(I'm just a lowly beginner so that's why my Japanese would probably be so bad XD)
Konnichiha. Romaji ni kakimasu de gomen nasai. Kanji de kaku shinai you ni watashi ha taida sugiru kara desu. Saa, ikimasu yo.

Kyou ni ha, nagai kyuuka wo oe, gakkou ni ikimashita. Hen na yatsu ga itte iji no warui ryouri o tabemashita. Tatoeba, 'Onara Pan' (Kare to iimashita) Sou AisuKuriimu', (Kare mo iimashita) to 'Uma Toumorokoshi' (Kare mo iimashita) Chiisana kodomo to omoimashita. Yon-sai dake ga omoimasu kara, sei ni shinai no.
Kurasu ha taikutsu shite ni itatte. Kesseki, chirigaku, seibutsugaku no kurasu ga arimashita. Kesseki ha ichiban taikustu ne.
Maa, kyou ni ha, ii na ibento ga arimasen. Owari desu kara. Ja.

Lol.. >> I couldn't add a lot of detail to it like I wanted to because of my limited knowledge of Japanese. Anyway.. Please correct it.
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Re: Watashi no nikki-Yonde kudasai!

Postby Chase » Wed 01.07.2009 3:56 pm

I don't have any more experience than you, here are just some thoughts, they might be wrong.

Tabetai wrote:Romaji ni kakimasu de gomen nasai.

the "ni" doesn't make sense to me. I'd write "romanji de kaite gomen nasai.", but I'm just guessing there.

Tabetai wrote:Kanji de kaku shinai you ni watashi ha taida sugiru kara desu.

That sentence looks complicated to me. Does it mean "I don't write in kanji because I became lazy" ?

Tabetai wrote:Kyou ni ha

Afaik, kyou doesn't take a "ni" particle. So just "kyou ha"

For the rest, I can't help you. I lack grammar and vocab to really understand it :(
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Re: Watashi no nikki-Yonde kudasai!

Postby richvh » Wed 01.07.2009 5:35 pm

At this point, you ought to tell us what you want to say in English, as it's often hard to figure out from your ungrammatical Japanese.
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Re: Watashi no nikki-Yonde kudasai!

Postby AJBryant » Thu 01.08.2009 7:21 pm

Also note:

There is no "N" In rômaji.


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