Partial song translation check (Hologram by Nico Touches)

[kentaku_sama]

In the song hologram by NICO TOUCHES THE WALLS　The first part goes:　
真っ白な景色に誘われて、僕は行くよ、まだ見ぬ世界へ。　　
Heres what I found:

真っ白な　Truly white
景色　View　
見ぬ　　Not see　（This is the first time I've ever heard of a ぬ　Negative form.）　
誘われる　To be invited
僕は　I　
行く　Go
まだ見ぬ世界　World I cannot yet see　Or have yet to see　

And I came up with
真っ白な景色に誘われて、僕は行くよ、まだ見ぬ世界へ。　　
I'm being invited into a truly white　Landscape,　So I'll go into the world I have yet to see.　
　

[spin13]

You did not, in the end, ask a question and, even if you had, "Question about sentence" is a terribly nondescript and unhelpful title for this thread. Unfortunately, you are not alone in this habit but rather than just berate allow me to offer a few examples of better thread titles with the hope that others also take notice:

Partial song translation check (Hologram by Nico Touches)
"Hologram" song intro translation check
まだ見ぬ世界へ, lyric translation check

Having never heard the song, I would translate 真っ白な景色に誘われて、僕は行くよ、まだ見ぬ世界へ as:

Beckoned by/to the pure white landscape
I'm going
To a world I still don't see

[Mike Cash]

You did not, in the end, ask a question and, even if you had, "Question about sentence" is a terribly nondescript and unhelpful title for this thread.

If past experience is any indication, there's a probability he won't come back and participate in this thread anyway.

[phreadom]

You did not, in the end, ask a question and, even if you had, "Question about sentence" is a terribly nondescript and unhelpful title for this thread.

If past experience is any indication, there's a probability he won't come back and participate in this thread anyway.

I don't think that's a fair or accurate assessment at all. Considering that they've been a member for over a year, have 136 posts, and that includes multiple posts on threads etc.

http://thejapanesepage.com/forum/search ... 1&sr=posts

Don't take out your personal grudges on people, you only end up driving contributing members off.

(Also, while it's true that they didn't actually ask a question in the first post or use a very descriptive subject line, I think that could have been handled a little more lightly as well.)

I've heard we have a bad reputation for things like this, and this probably doesn't help that.

Please play nice everyone.

[Mike Cash]

I have no grudge against him.

I made my statement based on the last couple of threads in which I engaged him seriously. The lesson I learned was to not bother doing so again.

[keatonatron]

Completely off topic, but I worked on the music video for this song. The white room, while looking like CG, is real. The black lines were made with simple tape.

Of course, with a thread title like this, I doubt anyone who would care will actually see this post...

[phreadom]

Completely off topic, but I worked on the music video for this song. The white room, while looking like CG, is real. The black lines were made with simple tape.

Of course, with a thread title like this, I doubt anyone who would care will actually see this post...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d3Edvt0XYQE



Plus I changed the title of the thread posts as per the advice from spin13.

[clay]

Completely off topic, but I worked on the music video for this song. The white room, while looking like CG, is real. The black lines were made with simple tape..

Pretty cool Keat!

[writebook]

Partial song translation check (Hologram by Nico Touches)
"Hologram" song intro translation check
まだ見ぬ世界へ, lyric translation check

Having never heard the song, I would translate 真っ白な景色に誘われて、僕は行くよ、まだ見ぬ世界へ as:

Beckoned by/to the pure white landscape
I'm going
To a world I still don't see

I think the "Beckoned" is a great improvement over "invited," lyric-wise.
The まだ見ぬ世界 part actually means a "a world I haven't seen before."
I'd translate it as "to a world yet unseen"

[Mike Cash]

See what I mean?

[spin13]

Indeed I do. Noted.

[phreadom]

I stand corrected.

[kentaku_sama]

Ok thanks, I'm sorry it took so long to reply, I went on vacation for almost a month.