Learn Japanese with JapanesePod101.com

View topic - Need help with homework

Need help with homework

Feel free to practice writing in Japanese or romaji. Help each other out with corrections or replying back in Japanese

Need help with homework

Postby tjpuser » Sun 03.14.2010 10:20 pm

Hi guys, I need help with a homework which requires me to write about my hobbies (3) and why i like them. I am a beginner level 1 student and so there's not much that i can write about. this is what i have so far which is simple and short.

http://img191.imageshack.us/img191/1784/85182295.jpg

I have an essay exam tomorrow so I tried using some new stuff to prepare for it in the answer so that i can have feedback if any of them are wrong. I find it quite hard to write/translate with limited grammar and vocab.
tjpuser
 
Posts: 1
Joined: Sun 03.14.2010 10:14 pm
Native language: NA

Re: Need help with homework

Postby NileCat » Tue 03.16.2010 9:36 am

Good work, tjpuser.
I like your writing.

わたしのいちはんすきなしゅみはパソコンのつかうことです。
→いち
→パソコン

ななさいにパソコンをもちましたから。
→ななさい(or 七さいで or 7さいで) or ななさいのときに

そして、パソコンでインターネットをつかって、ゲムをあそびます。
→インタネット (the "bar" has to be vertical like "l")
→ゲム (game)is not ゲム

つそれから、おんがくをきくことがすきです。
→Delete the first ""

おんがくをきかてから、わたしはしあわせをかんじます。
→"きかてから" is wrong. "おんがくをきくと" would be what you want to say.
or "おんがくをきいていると" perhaps.

そして、わたしは宇多田ヒカルのうたかすきで。
→ うた
→ すきです

さはのしゅみはえいがことです。
→ I don't know what you mean by "さは".
→ "えいがです。" or "えいがをみることです。"

えいがはとてもおもしるくて、いいてす。
→ おもしくて、いいす。(る&ろ is confuing. And small dotts are important!)

まいしゅうこいびととえいがかんへいきます。
→ Perfect!.
User avatar
NileCat
 
Posts: 1168
Joined: Sat 08.01.2009 2:11 pm
Location: Tokyo
Native language: Japanese


Return to 日本語の練習 (Practice Japanese)

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 4 guests