Greetings from London!

[hadouken!]

こんにちはみんなさん!

名前はマイクですが, ロンドンをすんでいます. 日本語は2年べんきょう したんですが, このごろ先生とべんきょう しました. ひらがなとカタカナをかくことができるんですが,今かんじをべんきょうして います. むずかしいですね!

みんなさんをちょっとはなしたらいいなとおもいます!

よろしく おねがい します!

マイク

Hopefully that should say:

Hello everyone!

My name is Mike and I live in London. I have been studying Japanese for two years, recently I have studied with a teacher. I am able to write hiragana and katakana and at the moment I am learning kanji. It's difficult!

I think it would be nice to talk to you all.

Nice to meet you!

Mike

[chikara]

TJPへようおそ　

[hadouken!]

You mean 'ようこそ' right?

Have I passed the first test?

[phreadom]

You mean 'ようこそ' right?

Have I passed the first test?

+1

[hadouken!]

Heh, nice to meet you guys! Seriously though, was my intorduction OK? There are probably a few mistakes, especially as I'm still trying to get to grips with the plain verb conjugations.

Regards,
Mike

[phreadom]

Heh, nice to meet you guys! Seriously though, was my intorduction OK? There are probably a few mistakes, especially as I'm still trying to get to grips with the plain verb conjugations.

Regards,
Mike

I'm just a beginner myself, but a few points I notice that might be wrong...

こんにちはみんなさん!

When using an honorific, みんな becomes みな... eg; みなさん

名前はマイクですが, ロンドンをすんでいます.

I think the が used in this sense is like "but...", so I'm not sure it works here? (See the が section of http://thejapanesepage.com/grammar/more_particles )

Also I think the second part should be ロンドンにすんでいます.

The rest either looks mostly right to me or is just beyond my skills yet to comment on. (Beyond the points I already made.)

Hopefully someone more knowledgeable can give you a better answer.

[Ranja]

Your Japanese is fairly good!
Here is the corrected version of your introduction.

こんにちはみなさん!

わたしの名前はマイクで、ロンドンにすんでいます。日本語を２年勉強しています。（or 日本語を勉強して２年になります。）さいきんは先生と（or 先生に付いて）べんきょうしています。ひらがなとカタカナをかくことができます。今はかんじをべんきょうしています。かんじはむずかしいですね。

みなさんと ちょっと おはなしができたらいいなと おもっています。

よろしく おねがい します。

こちらこそ、よろしく おねがい いたします。

[hadouken!]

phreadom, thank you for the みなさん correction. I didn't know about this at all!

ranja, thank you very much for the corrected version. I've let myself down a little bit here by not paying enough attention to the particles, simple things I should have known! Apologies. Thanks to your answer, I have learned some new words though!

[chikara]

You mean 'ようこそ' right?

Have I passed the first test?

With flying colours.

Dang typo.