Trial (line 1-4)

[mechakucha]

Here's my translation:

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When I tried to settle down in the lavatory stall, I heard a voice saying "Hey, what's up?" from the stall next door.

[ss]

Thanks Justin-san for the quick notes.
This is my attempt:

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While trying to settle my problem here, someone from next door saying "yo..how's thing?" was heard.
(( @.@ ??? !! ))

Sorry, just a side note...

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situation of C members differ.....
X-ref → How to keep the "Trial Thread" effectively - Memo prepared by Coco-san

J^.^Lvv

[Rael]

Here comes a typical question from a newbie on the forum, how do you go about to find this thread from the forum's main page? I always go from the link on the "home"-page, since that was where i discovered it.
Also, how you you make those neat little spoiler-tags?

[richvh]

It's in the History and Literature subforum (where there aren't many threads yet, since it's brand new), so just click on Discussion Forum then History and Literature then Trial and you're here.

As for the spoiler tags, {spoiler}This creates one if you replace all { }s with [ ]s{/spoiler} like this:

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This is a spoiler

(Click on the Quote button to see the source)

[cybermat]

Here is my attempt. There is some new grammar that I didn't know. Thanks to richvh san for pointing it out. The story is getting interesting though.

When I tried to lower my hip at the toilet, my neighbor said "Ah! You ok?"

Poor fella, I think he is getting old. I hope his hip is ok

[Rael]

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Ah, i see now, thanks.

Also, how do you decide wether you're "B" or "C"? Is there any test or something you need to take, or is it purely up to yourself to appreciate?

[richvh]

Pretty much up to yourself.

[Tessen]

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As i tried to sit down, a voice from next door said, 'yaa...everything's good?'

I didnt really know what to do with the やあ there, so i just left it, sounds kinda natural i think (like a yawn or something?)
I was also thinking of saying healthy for 元気、(as in, constipation issues...o_o?)how would that work out?

[playadom]

I've been following along for a while, and it's finally time to de-lurk.
I don't know how to make the spoiler text, so here's my translation.

'When I sat upon the facilities, a nearby voice said 'Hey, is everything alright in there?'

[Rael]

im having some trouble on the "と声がした" part.

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Sorry for using romaji, i just find it easier. anyway, what does "to shita" mean? Shouldn't it be "to itta", as iu means "to say"? I miht also be missing something, i have a kind of hard time dealing woth so many foreign letters at the same time

[tanuki]

I really don't understand much of the grammar here, but with the vocabulary and the context I understand....

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As I was lowering my waist to the urinal, I heard a voice from the neighboring (stall): "So, how are you doing?"

[AJBryant]

I didn't really know what to do with the やあ there,

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How would you translate "Heya!" or "Oy!" into Japanese?

Tony

[Sachi]

Hi, all! I'm back Here's my translation:

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As I was about to sit on the toilet, a voice from the next stall said, “Hey, how are you?”

[richvh]

2 days are up, Group B's turn. Here's my usual over-literal translation:

At the time that I was attempting to lower my hips onto the toilet, from next door came a voice going "Hey, are you healthy?"

My favored translation:

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Just as I was about to sit on the toilet, I heard "Hey, you ok?" from next door.

[Shibakoen]

I don't have much to add here since it seems like pretty much the same sentence keeps trickling down the page... Anyway,

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I tend to think of the "Yaa, Genki?" part as asking "Hey, you alright?" or "You OK?" instead of a generic conversation starter like "Hey, What's up" or "How ya doing" but that might be why I'm a B and not an A, ne...

One other point... I found the grammar hints from rich very useful and very interesting, but in this case I think the NO in "koega shita no" is different from the grammar point listed. I think it's a nominalizing NO, making the "~shitano + desu" construction possible.

In sum, what I get out of it is: "Just when I sat on the john a voice from next door asked "hey, you ok?"

At this point, I do have a question. If my translation of the "Yaa, Genki" thing is right, I'm wondering if the voice is instead of starting up a conversation wondering about the condition of the speaker since I thought we agreed on the earlier translation that the speaker is in a hurry and probably rushed into the bathroom to begin with, thus giving the guy in the adjacent stall something to be concerned about.