watashi no asa... watashi no nichi

[Diggity]

Go ji yojuugofun ni okimashita. Hito wa watashi no apaato no ue ni ongaku o kikimashita! Asagohan o tabemasendeshita. Hachi ji han ni watashi no shigoto e ikimashita.

Juu ni ji ni hirugohan o taberutsumori desu.

Nihongo o ni ji kan benkyou surutsumori desu.

Ku ji ni uchi e kaerimasu.

Atode, chotto osake o nomimasu.

Ichi ju ni nemasu!

I hope this is what I said:

I got up at 5:30. The person in the apartment above mine was listening to music! I didn't eat breakfast. I went to my job at 8:30. I plan on going to lunch at 12:00. I plan on studying japanese for 2 hours. I will go home at 9pm. Afterwards, I will drink a little alcohol (literal translation.) I will go to bed at 1am.

[eXp0se]

I read it like that.

The only thing I would change is in the sentence "watashi no apaato", I think you should switch the words around so it reads "watashi no apaato no ue ni hito".

I'm not sure on that, so maybe someone else can clarify, but it sounds good!

[Diggity]

I was saying "The people "wa" in the apartment above mine "ni" music "o" were listening."

After studying particles more (knowing what I know now) I should have used "de" in place of "ni."

De shows where something takes place, ni shows movement.

[sa]

Diggity wrote:
Go ji yojuugofun ni okimashita. Hito wa watashi no apaato no ue ni ongaku o kikimashita! Asagohan o tabemasendeshita. Hachi ji han ni watashi no shigoto e ikimashita.

Juu ni ji ni hirugohan o taberutsumori desu.

Nihongo o ni ji kan benkyou surutsumori desu.

Ku ji ni uchi e kaerimasu.

Atode, chotto osake o nomimasu.

Ichi ju ni nemasu!

I hope this is what I said:

I got up at 5:30. The person in the apartment above mine was listening to music! I didn't eat breakfast. I went to my job at 8:30. I plan on going to lunch at 12:00. I plan on studying japanese for 2 hours. I will go home at 9pm. Afterwards, I will drink a little alcohol (literal translation.) I will go to bed at 1am.

watashi wa goji sanjyuppun(Usually: goji han) ni okimashita.
watashi no apaato no ue ni sundeiru hito wa ongaku wo kiiteimashita!
watashi wa asagohan wo tabemasendeshita.
hachiji han ni shigoto ni dekakemashita.
hirugohan wo jyuuniji ni taberu tsumoridesu.
nihongo wo nijikan benkyou suru tsumoridesu.
kuji ni uchi e kaerimasu.
atode chotto(sukoshi) osake wo nomimasu.
ichiji ni nemasu.

good:D
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[Opgots]

Diggity wrote:
Go ji yojuugofun ni okimashita. Hito wa watashi no apaato no ue ni ongaku o kikimashita! Asagohan o tabemasendeshita. Hachi ji han ni watashi no shigoto e ikimashita.

Juu ni ji ni hirugohan o taberutsumori desu.

Nihongo o ni ji kan benkyou surutsumori desu.

Ku ji ni uchi e kaerimasu.

Atode, chotto osake o nomimasu.

Ichi ju ni nemasu!

I hope this is what I said:

I got up at 5:30. The person in the apartment above mine was listening to music! I didn't eat breakfast. I went to my job at 8:30. I plan on going to lunch at 12:00. I plan on studying japanese for 2 hours. I will go home at 9pm. Afterwards, I will drink a little alcohol (literal translation.) I will go to bed at 1am.

It was done mostly right, but there were a few mistakes. For one, "Go ji yojuugofun", says 5:45. Sa gave you the corrected version.

By the way, though it wont matter when you start writing in Japanese, you usually put "(Number) + ji)" together. So its shouldnt be, "Go ji," but "Goji." Again, this is vanity once you write in Japanese.

Another mistake was with "watashi no apaato no ue ni." You'd put that before the subject and add "Sunde Imasu." And just stick before the subject and its correct.

The final thing I want to say, and I may say more later, is you should use "Iru" to start showing progressive actions. For example, your phrase, "ongaku o kikimashita" means "he listened" not "He was listening." So:

Ongaku o kikimashita. = He listened.
Ongaku o kiite imashita. = He was listening.

Its best to use this, especially when refering to present tense.

Watashi wa tabete. = I eat.
Watashi wa tabete imasu. = I am eating.

It is much clearer.

[Diggity]

There are better ways to say what I said but I am studying from the Genki textbook and haven't learned the -te form yet (still have 2 more chapters to get through.) Trust me as I learn it I will put it to use!

I didn't even see that I typed 5:30 in romaji at the bottom. I wrote it while I was at work and got pulled away from it like 3 times while I was doing it. I woke up at 5:30 but didn't get up until 5:45...

[Alpha9]

Opgots wrote:

The final thing I want to say, and I may say more later, is you should use "Iru" to start showing progressive actions. For example, your phrase, "ongaku o kikimashita" means "he listened" not "He was listening." So:

Ongaku o kikimashita. = He listened.
Ongaku o kiite imashita. = He was listening.

Its best to use this, especially when refering to present tense.

Watashi wa tabete. = I eat.
Watashi wa tabete imasu. = I am eating.

It is much clearer.

I just recently learned -te form in my Japanese class and I was able to understand that it makes it an -ing verb w00t! I am proud of myself!

[Jrockgadaisukidazo]

Diggity wrote:
Go ji yojuugofun ni okimashita. Hito wa watashi no apaato no ue ni ongaku o kikimashita! Asagohan o tabemasendeshita. Hachi ji han ni watashi no shigoto e ikimashita.

Juu ni ji ni hirugohan o taberutsumori desu.

Nihongo o ni ji kan benkyou surutsumori desu.

Ku ji ni uchi e kaerimasu.

Atode, chotto osake o nomimasu.

Ichi ju ni nemasu!

I hope this is what I said:

I got up at 5:30. The person in the apartment above mine was listening to music! I didn't eat breakfast. I went to my job at 8:30. I plan on going to lunch at 12:00. I plan on studying japanese for 2 hours. I will go home at 9pm. Afterwards, I will drink a little alcohol (literal translation.) I will go to bed at 1am.

I know it is a little off your purpose, but I just want to thank you. ::yells at random people who never understand me, while pointing at the post:: This is all I wanted! someone to write something so I could translate...Everyone I asked before acted like it was such a big deal...

[somethinorwatever]

Diggity wrote:
I was saying "The people "wa" in the apartment above mine "ni" music "o" were listening."

After studying particles more (knowing what I know now) I should have used "de" in place of "ni."

De shows where something takes place, ni shows movement.

WHAT IS THE DIFFERENCE BETWEEN に　AND で?

[Gaijinian]

Ni=In
De=At

Sort of...

[maikeru]

WHAT IS THE DIFFERENCE BETWEEN に　AND で?

Hello

These particles are used for different things. They are not interchangeable

に

1 to (a place)
はくぶつかんに いきましょう Let's go to the museum
ここに きて ください Please come (to) here

2 at, in, on (time)
よじに かえります I go home at 4 o'clock
きんようびに れんしゅうを します。I practise on Fridays

3 for
ぎゅうにゅうは からだに いい です Milk is good for you (your body)

4 to (someone) (indirect object)
ペンフレンドに てがみを かきました。I wrote a letter to my friend

5 Marks location of someone/something
せいとたちは きょうしつに います The students are in the classroom
ここに おいて ください Please put it here

で

1 At (WHERE AN ACTIVITY TAKES PLACE)
わたしの へやで しゅくだいを します。

２ by (the means which you do something)
はしで たべます I eat with chopsticks
しんかんせんで いきます I go by bullet train

3 because of (reason)
かぜで がっこうを やすみました。I was away from school 'cos of a cold.

4 within (a length of time)
いちじかんで いけます。You can get there in an hour

I hope this helps!!!:)