Ideas please...

[Ueshu]

I am working on a doujishi, and I have the characters and the ending thought up, but I would like some ideas for a plot. It involves four girls who fall in love with one guy and they all get killed off in the end (including the guy), but I would apperciate some ideas for a more detailed plot. This is not a pornographic doujinshi, so no ideas having to do with porn, please (the rating is 13+).

[Ueshu]

Please remember this is a tragic love story, more of a shojo.

[Ueshu]

Please submit your ideas.

[Christian_]

You can edit or delete your posts, theres no need to make multiple posts, replies are usually fairly fast, but don't expect instant gratification.

Anyway, sorry, but I don't have any ideas for your manga. I do wish you good luck though, have fun.

[Ueshu]

Thanx, Christian_!

[Kichiro]

er, what about the plot being centred around a secret, only one of them holds it but they all want it, the one who hold it is near to attaining something amazing, and they others all crave the thing for that reason. They all pretend they do not know, creating like a tense mistrust, and plenty of double crossing. Maybe throw in a spirit who has something to gain from but in cahoots with whoever has this secret...??

sorry, not a very clear idea, but one all the same.

[Ongakuka]

P)

Edit: Pirates don't understand Japanese...

[clay]

Ongakuka wrote:
P)

Edit: Pirates don't understand Japanese...

But 海賊do!

[magma]

They're all stranded on a desert island, and each week they devise a series of tests to decide which one to eat next.

No, wait, here's an even better one: they are on Spring Break, and the guy keeps changing his mind about which girl he loves. Finally on the flight back they confront him and demand he choose. He's about to reply when an explosion is heard, and the plane starts to go down into the ocean. Then in tears he yells "I love you all!!! AAAAAAUUUUUUUGHHHHHH!!!!"

Or how about this: he's an energy sucking space mutant desguised as an attractive human male. He lures innocent girls into his lair, then when he kisses them, he actually consumes their energy and disposes of the remains. The first two girls are stuckup and you don't like them anyway, but the last one is very sweet and innocent, and when she agrees to go out on a date with the guy, you think "oh no, she's doomed!" But when he kisses her, it turns out she was a space mutant too, and they accidentally kill eachother!

[Reno]

They all love that guy? So they all try to impress him and than at the end they all get this big arguement with him present and than when he interfers they say shut up!!! "No you shut up" "Why dont YOU shut up?" "I will shut you up myself!" "AAAaaArGh!!" "OmG!1!!11" "1337n3ss!!" "lmaoroflrofl"

Something like that?

[magma]

Or maybe it's feudal-Japan, and they're all servants of a certain daimyo who's just died, or whose kingdom has fallen to an invader, and they all decide to commit seppuku rathar than betray their lord by serving another. You could build a very interesting moment around their final tea ceremony together...


Or, here's a good one: I just saw the "World Trade Center" movie two days ago, and it reminded me of the people stuck in the top floors of the towers who faced the grim choice of either being burned alive, or jumping to their deaths. Many chose to jump, and there are stories of groups of people holding hands and jumping together....