Round robin story

[richvh]

刀を
かたなを

[Tspoonami]

取って、
とって、

[richvh]

「この辺りに、
「このあたりに、

[Tspoonami]

刀は
かたなは

[richvh]

無用です。
むようです。

[Tspoonami]

魔法だけ
まほうだけ

[richvh]

で希望が
できぼうが

[Tspoonami]

あるから、

What personal pronoun should the 婆 use?

[richvh]

、私に
、わたしに

[Tspoonami]

刀を
かたなを

[richvh]

全然
ぜんぜん

[Tspoonami]

食う
くう

「禁止する」とかが「食う」よりいいと思えば、どうぞ変換してもいいですね。

[richvh]

I don't think our 婆 would use 食う, especially when in the shape of a 美人. And remember that it's 私に, so if you use 禁止すら you're saying that swords are prohibited for her. How about 指す or something?

[Tspoonami]

richvh wrote:
I don't think our 婆 would use 食う, especially when in the shape of a 美人. And remember that it's 私に, so if you use 禁止すら you're saying that swords are prohibited for her. How about 指す or something?

Go for it!

What's the difference between 食う and 食べる? 食う is more masculine and old-sounding or something? I honestly just felt like using 食う for the heck of it...

... Also, I forgot about the 私に part...

[richvh]

Yes, 食う is considered very rough, masculine speech. Ok, how about we replace 食う with:

指さないでください。
ささないでください。