Romaji to Hiragana Transliteration

[Clock Work]

Hi everyone! =] I spent a couple days memorizing hiragana and decided to transliterate a song for practice. I'm not perfect yet, because I did just start. There's bound to be mistakes so it would be nice if you guys could point them out for me? Thanks!

UNDER THE BLUE SKY - The Indigo
furi kaereba ima demo soko ni
oi kaketa ta mirai ga atta

boku no kokoro ni aru taisetsu na mono
mada mi e nai ao to
nagareru kumo ni negatta

Under the blue sky
ano hi bokura ga egaita yume kara
same nai you ni
tomara nai you ni
Under the blue sky
kagayaki nagara aruite yukou yo
owaranai tabi wa tsuzuku

kuchi ni dashita kotoba wa subete
tashikameai chikara ni kawaru

namida de sukuenai kanashimi sae mo
kimi ga keshitekureta
yasashisa iu mahou de

Under the blue sky
itsuka bokura ga kawashita kotoba wa
kanae nagara
mimamorare nagara
Under the blue sky
soshite mirai ni tsunagaru jikan ga
ugoki hagimeteru ima mo

Under the blue sky
ano hi bokura ga egaita yume kara
samenai you ni
tomaranai you ni
Under the blue sky
kagayaki nagara aruiteyukou yo
owaranai tabi wa tsuzuku

ふりかえれだいまでもさこに
おいかてたみらいだあった

どくのこころにあるたいせつなもの
まだみえないあおと
なれるくもにねがった

Under the blue sky
あのひどくらがえいたゆめから
さめないゆうに
とまらないゆうに
Under the blue sky
くがやきながらあるいてゆこうよ
おわらないたびわつずく

にだしたことばわすべて
たしかめあいさからにかわる

なみだですくえないかなしみさえも
きみがけしてくれた
やさしさというまほどで

Under the blue sky
いつかどくらがかわしたことばわ
かなえなが
みまもられながら
Under the blue sky
さしてみらいにつながるかんが
うぐきはじまてるいまも

Under the blue sky
あのひどくらがえいたゆめから
さめないゆうに
とまらないゆうに
Under the blue sky
くがやきながらあるいてゆこうよ
おわらないたびわつずく

[aKuMu]

Are you typing with the Kana keyboard layout? (one key for 1 kana) ?
There were a lot of errors. I advice you to learn the separate Hiragana more first, before 'transliterating'

Just the first ２　lines for ex ふりかえれだいまでもさこに should be ふりかえばいまでもそこに and おいかてたみらいだあった be
おいかけたたみらいがあった

I think it doesn't make that much sense to correct like that.


> THIS < is a good tool to train your memory imo.

[Clock Work]

I was using the IME one, where you draw it out with your mouse.

Thank you very much for the program and checking it! ^^ I'll use the program to practice for awhile.